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"Lots of varied shots; actors look into the camera sometimes; lip syncing is in time; shots with people in foreground and background look professional; sometimes looks awkward - 7 / 10"

"Some shots are missing but the ones that you chose are good because they suit the type of song. Pat and the other band members really suit the genre. - 7 / 10"

"Shots are good and varied - slow tracking looks good too. All wearing shirts + match, which is good. Sync is good. A different location amy have been better, but it's hard to find. Looks unfinished. - 7 / 10"

"Good use of instruments and miming is in time. Variet of shots. All in same location. - 7 / 10"

"Music matches visuals well. Lip syncing is good. Good camera shots of guitar. Costumes worked well. - 8 / 10"

"Styling / choice of artists is good. Movement of shots work well. Seems to be in sync with instruments. Simple mise-en-scene works well. - 7 / 10"

"Setting is simple, could've been better but understandable. Mise en scene with costume and setting works well, fairly simple. Nothing too bright and colourful. Lip syncing is mainly good, couple of times where slightly out of sync but oerall good. Timing with keyboard and bass is good. Bass player needs a haircut. Singer needs a shave. Panning is very effective - gives video a bit of an edge. If it weren't for gaps, would be class. - 6 / 10"

"Good variety of shots. Lighting is quite grey. Mise-en-scene - good style / image. Good lip syncing and timing with instruments. Music doesn't quite fit with the chosen location. - 7 / 10"

"It looks very obviously like a school. The Lighting gives a very great, uncandesant look. I like the camera movement, the panning works really well. Shots from the back left of Harry work really well but some of Pat's shots cut out Harry. - 6 / 10"

"Good quality camera. Like the simplicity. Good variety of shots used. Song seems pretty hard to lipsync to. Characters look authentic. -  5 / 10"

"A good variety of shots. Simplistic idea works well. Could include slightly more action. Characters look the part. - 5 / 10"

"Good lip syncing, but slightly out of time. Good use of instruments. Panning shots look good and fit with the pace of the song. - 7 / 10"

"Good variety of shots. Lipsyncing is good and well timed. I like how the pace of the shots reflects the pace of the music. Note sure about the location though... - 7 / 10"

"Setting is a bit 'school like'. Frontman looks beautiful. Ugly bass player. Lip sync bit rough in places. Some good framing. Bass fits with music. Without gaps would be a 7. - 6 / 10"